chowyeah

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jbvw9vOd5YE&playnext_from=TL&videos=w2X5AkVFvoc&feature=rec-LGOUT-farside_rev-rn-3r-8-HM

what is sencond music?
有praty music name is?

chowyeah

1:26 music name is what?

tom1314

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原帖由 chowyeah 於 2010-4-11 11:07 發表
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jbvw9vOd5YE&playnext_from=TL&videos=w2X5AkVFvoc&feature=rec-LGOUT-farside_rev-rn-3r-8-HM
what is sencond music?
有praty music name is?

hey dude,you should need more improve of your English language.....
and the song that's called:
don't stop make it pop - LadyGaGa



Chinglish....

[ 本帖最後由 tom1314 於 2010-4-11 15:10 編輯 ]

penisface

improveMENT
song that's ~ NO THAT


唔係LADY GAGA嫁, 係Ke$ha - Tik Tok

[ 本帖最後由 penisface 於 2010-4-11 15:49 編輯 ]

tom1314

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原帖由 penisface 於 2010-4-11 15:47 發表
improveMENT
song that's ~ NO THAT


唔係LADY GAGA嫁, 係Ke$ha - Tik Tok

你會唔會同人講
You need to improveMent your English?

係唔會!
ment用處不是You need to improvement your English Language


而是用於像....Self-Improvement(自我改善)....的地方..


不信?Let's Google IT!


搜尋:You need to improvement your English Language




我係Search唔到有一個係Improvement your English Language o既Result


搜尋:You need to improve your English Language






文法正確...




重有..
NO THAT係文法錯誤..






.


至於首歌,,我就唔知喇...




[ 本帖最後由 tom1314 於 2010-4-11 19:02 編輯 ]

chunchung38

improvement先岩..你自己睇下你3樓句野..係咪你打錯左唔知==more後面用V?仲有你個of字
improve係咁用,simply just : you should improve your english......................

[ 本帖最後由 chunchung38 於 2010-4-11 19:22 編輯 ]

tom1314

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原帖由 chunchung38 於 2010-4-11 19:13 發表
improvement先岩..你自己睇下你3樓句野..係咪你打錯左唔知==more後面用V?仲有你個of字
improve係咁用,simply just : you should improve your english......................

i don't think that
you have to improve your english language
is wrong..
improvement can be used in:
I cannot see any improvement in your writing.
-___________________
improve係咁用,simply just : you should improve your english......................


Re:咁我句同你有咩分別?

[ 本帖最後由 tom1314 於 2010-4-11 21:24 編輯 ]

chunchung38

你有個of 呀-.-同埋唔使搞埋d咩need more,好少見人should同need一齊用,more後面應該唔會係verb
or simply just : you need more("some" is better) improvement in your english
總之you should need more improve of your english有少少問題啦=.=

[ 本帖最後由 chunchung38 於 2010-4-11 21:48 編輯 ]

legend124

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原帖由 tom1314 於 2010-4-11 14:46 發表

hey dude,you should need more improve of your English language.....
and the song that's called:
don't stop make it pop - LadyGaGa



Chinglish....

4 mistakes

1. never use "language' after language like Cantonese,Italian,french,English
    that's meaningless as the nature of both words are duplicated
    make it simple,as we all know english is already an language, there's no need for us to define it again
2. need + noun/to infinitive,not a verb
    you can write "you need more improvement...." , "you need to improve..."
3. we seldom use "should need"
    better use "better need" or simply "you need improvement/should improve
4. "and the song that's called"
    two subjects in one sentence...?
    it should be "and the song is called" / "and for the song it's called"



you still need more efforts before being qualified to teach the others

[ 本帖最後由 legend124 於 2010-4-11 23:21 編輯 ]

simonlck

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原帖由 legend124 於 2010-4-11 22:22 發表

4 mistakes

1. never use "language' after language like Cantonese,Italian,french,English
    that's meaningless as the nature of both words are duplicated
    make it simple,as we all know english i ...

thanks so much. i often made the 3rd mistake you mentioned before.

[ 本帖最後由 simonlck 於 2010-4-11 23:12 編輯 ]

victoryhihi1

好野@@我地由L4D2區轉做ENGLISH區@@好開心XD

penisface

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原帖由 tom1314 於 2010-4-11 18:57 發表
你會唔會同人講
You need to improveMent your English?

係唔會!
ment用處不是You need to improvement your English Language


而是用於像....Self-Improvement(自我改善)....的地方..


不信?Let's Google IT!

...

should need more improve of your English language.....
need+ improve = verb x2
need to improve / need more improvement

No "That" <------ ok?

[ 本帖最後由 penisface 於 2010-4-12 18:31 編輯 ]

penisface

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原帖由 legend124 於 2010-4-11 22:22 發表

4 mistakes

1. never use "language' after language like Cantonese,Italian,french,English
    that's meaningless as the nature of both words are duplicated
    make it simple,as we all know english i ...

唔講唔識"and for the song it's called"

derekyin

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原帖由 legend124 於 2010-4-11 22:22 發表

4 mistakes

1. never use "language' after language like Cantonese,Italian,french,English
    that's meaningless as the nature of both words are duplicated
    make it simple,as we all know english i ...

有高人

legend124

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原帖由 derekyin 於 2010-4-12 19:41 發表


有高人

thank you