借粟一燒._.

Other learning experience?

紙包蒸餾水

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原帖由 借粟一燒._. 於 2012-2-1 22:50 發表
Other learning experience?

類似係呢d...........我就快癲拉譯到,仲要錯勁多

No0B

喇..姐係咁
小弟本身英文就極差
有錯請指正
旨在練習架姐


你好,我叫xxx.在六年的校園生活中,我在經濟科培養了濃厚的興趣,而我亦
Hello,I am xxx.I've studied in this school for six year and I've developed an strong interest in Economic due to the six-year school life.Also, I
非常熱愛創作,並將創作品展露於其他人眼前.所以我希望將來在市場推廣
keen on writing and always showing my works to others.Therefore, I want to take part in marketing
,市場策劃及廣告設計的範疇中參與其中,把自己的創意發揮
and ads-designing in the fulture in order to exert my creativity.


我認為過往在校園吸取的經驗有助我實踐抱負,除了日常跟同學交流外,
The experience I gained in school can help me practice my ambition. Apart form daily commutation with my schoolmates,
亦曾在學校舉行的義賣活動中擔任工作人員,嘗試設計推廣策略,並按客
I took part in charity sell in school by being a staff, and I tried to plan the promotion strategy.
人喜好選購貨品.向校外人士銷售,這類型活動為年輕的我充實市場經驗
I purchase goods with an eye to the want of my customer. The experience from these activitys equiped me
向實踐抱負踏進一小步.
and boost me to my ambition

譯到呢一度
因為我自己都有篇作文未搞掂..
等睇高手表演譯晒成篇
至於用唔用你自己決定啦





btw...google翻譯其實真係已經唔錯...
yahoo:

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You are good, I call xxx. in six year campus life, I in passed through Jike to raise the strong interest, but I also deeply loved the creation, and will create the work to expose before other human eyes. Therefore I hoped that in the future in the market introduction, the market plan and in the advertisement design's category will participate in which, own creativity display I thought that passing is helpful me in the campus absorption's experience to practice the aspiration, besides exchanges daily with schoolmate, also once was the staff in the school hold's charity bazaar activity, the attempt design promotion strategy, and likes according to the visitor selecting and purchasing the goods. Sells to the extracurricular public figure, this type activity enriches the market experience for young me to step into a half step to the practice aspiration. Moreover I once in the school materials for internal reference and the environmental protection fashion design competition, was the men's clothing designer and the model, the attempt utilization different material waste, for example: Abandons the disc, 枱 the cloth, makes clothes to step the stage to sparkle lives the splendor, Ying takes the champion and best model's at the same time brings many confidence for mine design product ability, makes me to realize the dream bravely. I believed that university's professor can assist me to inquire into the knowledge and the fumble road ahead, let my academic society more solution difficult methods, moreover under the university strong study atmosphere and the degree-of-freedom are high, I can according to my ability in the study the display creativity, excavation more knowledge, moreover the specialized school organization, can give lets me study this is relieved I yearned for that hoped you can give me to the opportunity

[ 本帖最後由 No0B 於 2012-2-2 17:13 編輯 ]

阿平

Hello,
my name is
XXX,
at
six years
of
school life,
I trained
in the
area of
​​economic
interest,
and I

Very
creative love,
and make the
products
to show off
in front
of other people.
So I
hope that in
the marketing

Marketing and advertising
design in
the category in which
their work


I think the
lessons of
the past
on campus
vision
to help me,
in addition to
the daily
interaction
with students,

Also
held
at the school
bazaar
staff
was
trying to
design
marketing strategies,
according to the customer

People want
to buy products.
Sales
outside the party,
this kind
of experience for the
young
market
enrich
my

Vision
to enter into
one
small step.


I am also
involved in
protecting the environment
in the school
of fashion
design, designers
and models
and men,
to try

Try
using different
types of
waste such as
discarded
CDs,
tablecloths,
clothes
on stage
made
​​of glittering,

Champion
and take the
victory, while
the best model
for my product
design to
bring
a lot of confidence
in the ability to

I'm more
ambitious
dreams.


I believe
a
professor
to help me
learn
knowledge
and explore
the road,
I decided
to learn
from

It is
difficult to
approach,
and the University
of strong
learning
atmosphere and
a
high degree
of freedom,
I
designed on the basis
of their ability

Creativity
in learning,
more
knowledge and professional
schools
to teach, give me
peace of mind
to know

This is what
I seek,
I
hope you
give
me the opportunity to

[ 本帖最後由 阿平 於 2012-2-1 23:25 編輯 ]

kaka123

學呢d.先學少量vocab,再大量grammer,寫一堆後先睇vocab(我本人睇法)

C_k

Jupas 0.0 我都要打了haha
google 翻譯錯到嘔哂奶

kaka123

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原帖由 kaka123 於 2012-2-1 23:24 發表
學呢d.先學少量vocab,再大量grammer,寫一堆後先睇vocab(我本人睇法)

仲有想學英文唔好用google(查vocab另計)

kaka123

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原帖由 紙包蒸餾水 於 2012-1-31 21:57 發表
甘願傾家蕩產,只求緊急換成英文

你好,我叫xxx.在六年的校園生活中,我在經濟科培養了濃厚的興趣,而我亦
非常熱愛創作,並將創作品展露於其他人眼前.所以我希望將來在市場推廣
,市場策劃及廣告設計的範疇中參與其中,把 ...

Greetings, I am xxx. I have grown strong interest in economic field during my six years school life. Also, I am creative and love to show it to others. Therefore, I would love to participate in marketing and advertising design in the future which can show my creativity.

I think my experience gained from my school life could help me achieve my objectives. Besides communicate with classmates, I am a helper in many charity functions held by my school, where I use my marking knowledge to help customer choosing the best products. Those experience are valuable have me to proceed forward.

On the other hand, I joined the green fashion show as a designer and model by using some different reusable waste, I won the competition and gain confidence in my designing skills, this will help me down the road.

I truly believe the professor can help my academic and give me views and advice of my future, my problem solving skills etc... And with the strong and free learning atmosphere, I could maximize my creativity and knowledge and get the most of the professional facilitates. I hope I could get the fair chance to the opportunities for me to achieve my goals.

求賜教

[ 本帖最後由 kaka123 於 2012-2-2 00:14 編輯 ]

紙包蒸餾水

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原帖由 kaka123 於 2012-2-1 23:43 發表
Greetings, I am xxx. I have grown strong interest in economic field during my six years school life. Also, I am creative and love to show it to others. Therefore, I would love to participate in marke ...

我吾睇番自己篇野,我發現我係吾識解=.=

kaka123

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原帖由 紙包蒸餾水 於 2012-2-2 00:46 發表

我吾睇番自己篇野,我發現我係吾識解=.=

所以我有d擔心會穿煲,noob果篇好似仲難

花文.

Hello, my name is xxx. in the six years of school life, I trained in the economic interest section, and I
very much love the creativity, and create works of showing off in front of other people So I hope that in marketing
, marketing and advertising design in the areas involved, the creativity of their own past, I think the lessons in the campus vision to help me, in addition to daily communication with students, but also in the school The charity event was held as a staff, try to design marketing strategies, according to passengers who like to buy goods. to outside sales people, this type of activity for the young market experience to enrich my vision to step into a small practice. In addition I have participation in environmental protection in the school fashion design competition, designers and models as men, try try to use different waste materials, such as: abandoned CDs, tablecloths, clothes on stage made ​​of glittering, take the championship and win the best model while the design for my ability to bring a lot of confidence in the product, so I have more courage to realize their dreams. I believe that the university professor to help me explore knowledge and explore the road, I learned more from solution to our difficulties, and the University of strong learning atmosphere and the high degree of freedom, I am able to according to their ability in learning and creativity, to explore more knowledge, and professional educational institutions, give me peace of mind to learn this is my longing, hope you can give opportunities for me

°★sKulL.Rj-

上translate綱 copy n paste??

花文.

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原帖由 °★sKulL.Rj- 於 2012-2-2 01:04 發表
上translate綱 copy n paste??

google

kaka123

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原帖由 °★sKulL.Rj- 於 2012-2-2 01:04 發表
上translate綱 copy n paste??

人地有改野

°★sKulL.Rj-

改左就唔會錯哂grammar