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I participate in
the(可以唔要) drama
(+個club) because i want to challenge myself
(可轉做my own limit).
In order to improving
(improve) my english
(e要大寫) ,Oral
(唔洗大寫) presentation skills
(唔洗S) in English and acting skills
(唔洗S)
well
(呢個係口語化 轉用moreover會好D),Joining
(唔洗大寫 另用participate會好D) yours
(用返 this drama club , 個club唔係老師的 唔用yours) is my best choice
(用option會令D 最好俾埋原因人地).
NO matter how difficult it will be
(it will be 唔洗要),I will practice more
(轉做I will pay effort as high as possible)
As the olding
(冇olding呢個字 用elder) saying gose
(未聽過gose呢個字)," Practise make perfect."
(最後加多句 Hope we can be touch in coming year 間接暗示自己會成功咁解 俾D自信對方 )
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