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HKCEE Writing 1996 question(2)

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You are a member of a new creative writing group . You have been asked to write an imaginative story which you will read out to the group at the next meeting .
Your story begins like this :
One day i fell asleep on the MTR and when i woke up , the train was empty . I got off the train , ran out of the station and saw that all the streets and the buildings were empty too . I couldn't see anybody at all ... ..

貌似而家有三百幾字..

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原帖由 A_c 於 2011-5-26 00:55 發表
You are a member of a new creative writing group . You have been asked to write an imaginative story which you will read out to the group at the next meeting .
Your story begins like this :
One day i ...

我一開始描寫周圍環境,再話搵到個男仔,之後起左個國家,做左kin,之後佢死左,我因為傷心自殺,之後番番去自己個真實世界。

咁樣唔得好唔好..
有冇意見可以比到我。

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原帖由 Reeve. 於 2011-5-26 01:02 發表
寫story要好多vocab
我以前只係會揀one-sided去寫 , 特別係有句statement果隻
比較容易寫破論

我反而中意寫story , 四格有一格問號比你自己作戈隻最好。
次為議論文。

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原帖由 FiNaL◎峰 於 2011-5-26 05:01 發表

唔make sense
都話四處empty  如何來國家既人民? (話搵到幾個人尚可  但起國家就比較離題)
二黎你仲係真實世界  你係MTR同woke up, 除非你係寫返原來你仲發緊夢姐
個題目好似抄緊好多套電影, 行屍走肉／ 唔記得咩名 ...

同戈個人生仔- -

發夢比會考 ban 左 , 用既話就一定會唔合格。

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原帖由 FiNaL◎峰 於 2011-5-26 20:07 發表


我頂! 生仔生左成個國家出黎 仲狼過隻豬-.-''

i haven't idea la ..