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你比分我我幫你作哂佢

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letter一開始一定要講hi,hello果d之後介紹下自己
之後如果你想入果間大學ge 話你可以話
i am willing to join your university (會串小小）
I really hope that i can join your university （有禮貌小小）
之後我唔知你內容係咩好難幫到你
但如果你真係想幫ge話 可以＋我skype (唔洗錢的)

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原帖由 紙包蒸餾水 於 2012-1-31 22:58 發表


但係我未知會報咩大學(如果得好大機會係poly同c u)
會吾會吾寫明好d,我而家差開頭同總結,中間內容7788

雖然好吸引,但係我想自己既未來用自己既手寫,所以我要求都係大家幫我開個頭

而家中段唯一完成既一小段, ...

In the community, I want to server in marketing and investment market, it is because I interested in economic category.In my secondary school, I have joined a lot activities which is  related to economics.Except to interflow with classmades in economics, I had be a volunteer in a charity bazaar, I need to make use of my knowledge of economics that I can sell our product easlier, like how to popularize, which product to be well liked, etc.That is the main reason of choose to get into university, I can learn knowledge in depth to help me to practice my aspiration.


改左你小小野...紫果到不如你用中文打一次我幫你轉反做中文....
綠果到 好唔通順...好似無啦啦多左句野咁...

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紫﹣except communicating with my classmates about economics, also i have joined charity sell, charity activity and stuff.
綠﹣In the economic program, i have learnt how to popularize my product and grasped about consumer's mind

[ 本帖最後由 °★sKulL.Rj- 於 2012-2-1 01:14 編輯 ]

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點fake

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打錯兩個tense姐 求其打ma

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傻仔樂

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上translate綱 copy n paste??

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改左就唔會錯哂grammar