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作者: 紙包蒸餾水 時間: 2012-1-31 21:57 標題: 甘願傾家蕩產,只求緊急換成英文

甘願傾家蕩產,只求緊急換成英文

你好,我叫xxx.在六年的校園生活中,我在經濟科培養了濃厚的興趣,而我亦
非常熱愛創作,並將創作品展露於其他人眼前.所以我希望將來在市場推廣
,市場策劃及廣告設計的範疇中參與其中,把自己的創意發揮

我認為過往在校園吸取的經驗有助我實踐抱負,除了日常跟同學交流外,
亦曾在學校舉行的義賣活動中擔任工作人員,嘗試設計推廣策略,並按客
人喜好選購貨品.向校外人士銷售,這類型活動為年輕的我充實市場經驗
向實踐抱負踏進一小步.

另外我又曾在校內參與環保時裝設計比賽,擔任男裝設計師及模特兒,嘗
試運用不同物料的廢物,例如:棄置光碟,枱布,製成衣服踏上舞台閃閃生輝,
嬴取冠軍及最佳模特兒的同時為我的設計產品的能力帶來不少信心,令
我更勇敢實現夢想.

我相信大學的教授能協助我探究知識及摸索前路,讓我從中學會更多解決
困難的方法,而且大學濃厚的學習氣氛及自由度高之下,我能按自己能力
在學習上發揮創意,發掘更多學識,而且專業的辦學機構,能給讓我安心學習
這都是我嚮往的,盼望你能給機會予我

[ 本帖最後由紙包蒸餾水於 2012-2-1 22:32 編輯 ]

作者: Baby.dick 時間: 2012-1-31 22:04

LM好似5洗扣分架可

作者: 獅子暴風壁 時間: 2012-1-31 22:08

jupas 仲未過限期?

作者: 沉默の羔羊 時間: 2012-1-31 22:09 標題: 回復 2# 的帖子

LM是咩

作者: 紙包蒸餾水 時間: 2012-1-31 22:12

2月2到期,不過佢話推遲既消息都係人地轉告,所以今日做完即刻交,安心d

作者: ωǒ璦yōu╋ 時間: 2012-1-31 22:18 標題: 回復 1# 的帖子

XD
最簡單，用中文寫1次，再用金山詞典轉番英文.

ps：我都是eng白癡

作者: 紙包蒸餾水 時間: 2012-1-31 22:33

咁轉d grammer會有問題=.=

作者: ωǒ璦yōu╋ 時間: 2012-1-31 22:35 標題: 回復 7# 的帖子

都話我英文腦殘的啦.
我中2，幫你唔到

作者: °★sKulL.Rj- 時間: 2012-1-31 22:37

你比分我我幫你作哂佢

作者: ωǒ璦yōu╋ 時間: 2012-1-31 22:38 標題: 回復 9# 的帖子

老外來了

作者: BsTh_MIlkB 時間: 2012-1-31 22:39

我今日交左我牙sir同me講一開始自我介紹一下先

之後講你既興趣,可以當中加入一d事件

之後就係你將來的願望個d啦

作者: °★sKulL.Rj- 時間: 2012-1-31 22:51

letter一開始一定要講hi,hello果d之後介紹下自己
之後如果你想入果間大學ge 話你可以話
i am willing to join your university (會串小小）
I really hope that i can join your university （有禮貌小小）
之後我唔知你內容係咩好難幫到你
但如果你真係想幫ge話可以＋我skype (唔洗錢的)

作者: 紙包蒸餾水 時間: 2012-1-31 22:58

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原帖由 °★sKulL.Rj- 於 2012-1-31 22:51 發表
letter一開始一定要講hi,hello果d之後介紹下自己
之後如果你想入果間大學ge 話你可以話
i am willing to join your university (會串小小）
I really hope that i can join your university （有禮貌小小）
之後我唔知你 ...

但係我未知會報咩大學(如果得好大機會係poly同c u)
會吾會吾寫明好d,我而家差開頭同總結,中間內容7788

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原帖由 °★sKulL.Rj- 於 2012-1-31 22:37 發表
你比分我我幫你作哂佢

雖然好吸引,但係我想自己既未來用自己既手寫,所以我要求都係大家幫我開個頭

而家中段唯一完成既一小段,放上泥比大家參詳,吾淮笑......

In the community, I want to server in marketing and investment market, it because I am very interest in economic category.In secondary school, I was always join some activites to be related to economics.Except to interflow with classmades in economics, I had be a volunteer in a charity bazaar, I need to make use of my knowledge of economics that I can sell our product more easy, like how to popularize, which product to be well liked, etc.That is the main reason of choose to get into university, I can learn knowledge in depth to help me practice my aspiration.

[ 本帖最後由紙包蒸餾水於 2012-1-31 23:01 編輯 ]

作者: hkl0vekk 時間: 2012-1-31 23:03

開頭 = 引言嗎?.

作者: kaka123 時間: 2012-1-31 23:09

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原帖由 紙包蒸餾水 於 2012-1-31 22:58 發表

但係我未知會報咩大學(如果得好大機會係poly同c u)
會吾會吾寫明好d,我而家差開頭同總結,中間內容7788

雖然好吸引,但係我想自己既未來用自己既手寫,所以我要求都係大家幫我開個頭

而家中段唯一完成既一小段, ...

In the community, I want to server in marketing and investment market, it because I am very interest in economic category.In secondary school, I was always join some activites to be related to economics.Except to interflow with classmades in economics, I had be a volunteer in a charity bazaar, I need to make use of my knowledge of economics that I can sell our product more easy, like how to popularize, which product to be well liked, etc.That is the main reason of choose to get into university, I can learn knowledge in depth to help me practice my aspiration.

睇一陣就呢D錯,仲有應該

作者: °★sKulL.Rj- 時間: 2012-1-31 23:13

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原帖由 紙包蒸餾水 於 2012-1-31 22:58 發表

但係我未知會報咩大學(如果得好大機會係poly同c u)
會吾會吾寫明好d,我而家差開頭同總結,中間內容7788

雖然好吸引,但係我想自己既未來用自己既手寫,所以我要求都係大家幫我開個頭

而家中段唯一完成既一小段, ...

In the community, I want to server in marketing and investment market, it is because I interested in economic category.In my secondary school, I have joined a lot activities which is related to economics.Except to interflow with classmades in economics, I had be a volunteer in a charity bazaar, I need to make use of my knowledge of economics that I can sell our product easlier, like how to popularize, which product to be well liked, etc.That is the main reason of choose to get into university, I can learn knowledge in depth to help me to practice my aspiration.

改左你小小野...紫果到不如你用中文打一次我幫你轉反做中文....
綠果到好唔通順...好似無啦啦多左句野咁...

作者: 紙包蒸餾水 時間: 2012-1-31 23:30

紫色個到我想講,除左平時同同學交流經濟知識外,我仲曾參加義賣活動,擔任義賣職員

綠色個到我想講經濟知識令我學會如何推廣及選擇適合消費者口味既貨品

好感激大家幫我手,人間有情T_T

作者: °★sKulL.Rj- 時間: 2012-1-31 23:43

紫﹣except communicating with my classmates about economics, also i have joined charity sell, charity activity and stuff.
綠﹣In the economic program, i have learnt how to popularize my product and grasped about consumer's mind

[ 本帖最後由 °★sKulL.Rj- 於 2012-2-1 01:14 編輯 ]

作者: 沉默の羔羊 時間: 2012-1-31 23:45

我的英文馬馬

作者: 樂瞳 時間: 2012-1-31 23:55

講真份野係重要就搵人幫成份你寫喇=.=
GRAMMAR有好多唔岩.... D VOCAB 又唔夠
TONES 又唔夠禮貌...

作者: 樂瞳 時間: 2012-1-31 23:55

引用:

原帖由 °★sKulL.Rj- 於 2012-1-31 23:43 發表
紫﹣except communicating with my classmates about economics, also i have join charity sell, charity activity and stuff.
綠﹣In the economic program, i have learn how to popularize my product and grasp abo ...

I've learn =,=

fake

作者: MisSmilex2 時間: 2012-1-31 23:56

我都唔識英文....

作者: °★sKulL.Rj- 時間: 2012-2-1 00:01 標題: 回復 21# 的帖子

點fake

作者: .mL 時間: 2012-2-1 00:04

等你放完文上來..我睇睇

作者: 樂瞳 時間: 2012-2-1 00:07

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原帖由 °★sKulL.Rj- 於 2012-2-1 00:01 發表
點fake

幾時開始pps係hv+ simple present

:lol

作者: MisSmilex2 時間: 2012-2-1 00:08

佢英文好勁....

作者: .mL 時間: 2012-2-1 00:09

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原帖由樂瞳於 2012-2-1 00:07 發表
幾時開始pps係hv+ simple present

佢當人傻...另外...唔用so仲好...用其他連接..that啊果d...如果which/who/where......果d後面有was/were...成個hide左佢..會好好多

作者: .mL 時間: 2012-2-1 00:11

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原帖由樂瞳於 2012-1-31 23:55 發表
講真份野係重要就搵人幫成份你寫喇=.=
GRAMMAR有好多唔岩.... D VOCAB 又唔夠
TONES 又唔夠禮貌...

同意...grammar mistake好多

作者: 凍檸、樂 時間: 2012-2-1 01:11

ROY哥教英文上泥抽抽水先

作者: °★sKulL.Rj- 時間: 2012-2-1 01:15 標題: 回復 25# 的帖子

打錯兩個tense姐求其打ma

作者: AV創高峰 時間: 2012-2-1 01:15

ml出現了

作者: °★sKulL.Rj- 時間: 2012-2-1 01:15 標題: 回復 29# 的帖子

傻仔樂

作者: 紙包蒸餾水 時間: 2012-2-1 01:19

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原帖由樂瞳於 2012-1-31 23:55 發表
講真份野係重要就搵人幫成份你寫喇=.=
GRAMMAR有好多唔岩.... D VOCAB 又唔夠
TONES 又唔夠禮貌...

算拉,以我英文水準係咁上下

咁大個人得科經濟係有睇頭
我寧願辛苦d請教人,都吾想將自己要做既野假手於人(雖然我好懶

)

作者: 紙包蒸餾水 時間: 2012-2-1 01:21

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原帖由 .mL 於 2012-2-1 00:09 發表
佢當人傻...另外...唔用so仲好...用其他連接..that啊果d...如果which/who/where......果d後面有was/were...成個hide左佢..會好好多

話左就算有地雷我都吾會知....因為我英文仲差過得中二既啊妹=.=

作者: FiNaL◎峰 時間: 2012-2-1 05:22

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原帖由 紙包蒸餾水 於 2012-1-31 21:57 發表
順面講一講我係想做市場策劃(吾知英文名係咩=.=),投資顧問等等從商既工作

Marketing Director?,
Investment Adviser?

作者: bossosad 時間: 2012-2-1 05:27 標題: 回復 35# 的帖子

英文高手~_~

作者: FiNaL◎峰 時間: 2012-2-1 06:07

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原帖由 kaka123 於 2012-1-31 23:09 發表

In the community (What community?or sociality?), I want to server in marketing and investment market, it because I am very interest in economiccategory(感覺好怪, 我會改寫, I was deeply interested in economic and business world when I was young, then till now I think I could aspire my dream) .In secondary school, I was always join some activites to be related to economics.(I always participated in any economic activities meanwhile I felt really enjoyable. So, I would drum up all the chances to let me ... ) Except to interflow with classmades in economics, I had be(have used) volunteer in a charity bazaar, I need to make use of my knowledge of economics (I hope I could utilize my knowledge in economics to ... ) that I can sell our(那來的our? 不懂, 什麼product?) product more easy(more easily) , like how to popularize, which product to be well liked, etc.That is the main reason of choose to get into university, (如果呢封信係交比學校,我諗你要寫間學校有咩特點可以幫助你實淺你既自願) I can learn knowledge in depth to help me practice my aspiration. <這句不懂改了, 就算translate返做中文, 我可以學習更深奧知識來幫助我準備我既抱負, )

我英文都唔是好好, 所以我都唔係好識改你既表達方式
同埋交一段野搞惦架啦=.=?... 我個frd今年係toronto都報 econ, UT仲有好多間, 都寫左好多篇咁既野
如果想我幫手問佢借黎比你做參考既就

$ 你懂的

[ 本帖最後由 FiNaL◎峰於 2012-2-1 06:13 編輯 ]

作者: FiNaL◎峰 時間: 2012-2-1 06:11

篇野好虛泛... main idea太少, 其實作文寫上去grammar唔係咁重要, 最緊要內容夠精彩, 表達到你既意思, 當然最basic既grammar錯左都幾係野)~

作者: .奶茶-_ 時間: 2012-2-1 09:42

我唔係英文神手

作者: .mL 時間: 2012-2-1 09:45

引用:

原帖由 紙包蒸餾水 於 2012-2-1 01:21 發表

話左就算有地雷我都吾會知....因為我英文仲差過得中二既啊妹=.=

甘你要+油...因為e類文錯grammar堅係樣衰

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原帖由 .奶茶-_ 於 2012-2-1 09:42 發表
我唔係英文神手

你唔幫或冇能力幫可以唔回.冇必要留言呃錢

作者: .★wAi哥_ゞ 時間: 2012-2-1 09:50

伍糸幾識

作者: 紙包蒸餾水 時間: 2012-2-1 21:32

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原帖由 FiNaL◎峰 於 2012-2-1 06:07 發表
我英文都唔是好好, 所以我都唔係好識改你既表達方式
同埋交一段野搞惦架啦=.=?... 我個frd今年係toronto都報 econ, UT仲有好多間, 都寫左好多篇咁既野
如果想我幫手問佢借黎比你做參考既就$ 你懂的 ...

我load左好耐都睇吾明T_T
其實中文版係咁

你好,我叫xxx.在六年的校園生活中,我在經濟科培養了濃厚的興趣,而我亦
非常熱愛創作,並將創作品展露於其他人眼前.所以我希望將來在市場推廣
,市場策劃及廣告設計的範疇中參與其中,把自己的創意發揮

我認為過往在校園吸取的經驗有助我實踐抱負,除了日常跟同學交流外,
亦曾在學校舉行的義賣活動中擔任工作人員,嘗試設計推廣策略,並按客
人喜好選購貨品.向校外人士銷售,這類型活動為年輕的我充實市場經驗
向實踐抱負踏進一小步.

另外我又曾在校內參與環保時裝設計比賽,擔任男裝設計師及模特兒,嘗
試運用不同物料的廢物,例如:棄置光碟,枱布,製成衣服踏上舞台閃閃生輝,
嬴取冠軍及最佳模特兒的同時為我的設計產品的能力帶來不少信心,令
我更勇敢實現夢想.

我相信大學的教授能協助我探究知識及摸索前路,讓我從中學會更多解決
困難的方法,而且大學濃厚的學習氣氛及自由度高之下,我能按自己能力
在學習上發揮創意,發掘更多學識,而且專業的辦學機構,能給讓我安心學習
這都是我嚮往的,盼望你能給機會予我

語文水平(中英都係..)有限,我譯左成世都譯吾到..........(就快到期T_T)
幫手譯下

[ 本帖最後由紙包蒸餾水於 2012-2-1 22:23 編輯 ]

作者: ゞSn0w 時間: 2012-2-1 21:33

精水

作者: 紙包蒸餾水 時間: 2012-2-1 22:07

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原帖由ゞSn0w 於 2012-2-1 21:33 發表
精水

做咩=.=?係米救援...........

作者: 　ゞ.__κJa1. 時間: 2012-2-1 22:16 標題: 回復 44# 的帖子

你想叫人翻譯定幫你改

作者: 紙包蒸餾水 時間: 2012-2-1 22:20

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原帖由　ゞ.__κJa1. 於 2012-2-1 22:16 發表
你想叫人翻譯定幫你改

直頭翻譯.......我用成個鐘譯得一段,仲要吾知有無錯..

作者: 　ゞ.__κJa1. 時間: 2012-2-1 22:21 標題: 回復 46# 的帖子

點解唔用google?

作者: tony987852 時間: 2012-2-1 22:21 標題: 回復 47# 的帖子

Canada School.

作者: 　ゞ.__κJa1. 時間: 2012-2-1 22:21

Hello, my name is xxx. In the six years of school life, I trained in the economic interest section, and I
Very creative love, and create works of showing off in front of other people, so I hope that in the marketing
, Marketing and advertising design in the areas involved, put their ideas

I think that past lessons on campus vision to help me, in addition to daily communication with students, the
Also held in the school bazaar served as staff try to design marketing strategies, according to customer
People like to buy goods. To outside sales people, this type of activity for the young market experience to enrich my
The vision to step into a small step.

Also I was involved in environmental protection in the school fashion design competition, designers and models as men, to try
Try to use different waste materials, such as: abandoned CDs, tablecloths, clothes on stage made of glittering,
Champion and take the win, while the best model for my design products bring a lot of confidence in the ability to make
I am more daring dream.

I believe that the university professor to help me explore knowledge and explore the road, I resolved to learn more from
Difficult to approach, and the University of strong learning atmosphere and high degree of freedom, I am according to their ability to
Creativity in learning, to explore more knowledge, and professional educational institutions, give me peace of mind to learn
That is what I aspire to, hope you give me the opportunity to

作者: 　ゞ.__κJa1. 時間: 2012-2-1 22:22

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原帖由 tony987852 於 2012-2-1 22:21 發表
Canada School.

姐系點= =唔明

作者: 援兵_★ 時間: 2012-2-1 22:24

學英文呢家野冇得急嫁wo- -
努力啦

作者: 　ゞ.__κJa1. 時間: 2012-2-1 22:28 標題: 回復 51# 的帖子

你有無睇內容

作者: 再度回來 時間: 2012-2-1 22:28

Google 翻譯

作者: 紙包蒸餾水 時間: 2012-2-1 22:30

google個個錯grammer嫁

作者: tony987852 時間: 2012-2-1 22:33

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原帖由　ゞ.__κJa1. 於 1-2-2012 10:22 PM 發表

姐系點= =唔明

Oops...認錯人
冇野啦

作者: -YiN. 時間: 2012-2-1 22:34

最好要自己搵

1000蚊學到好多野

1000個最常用生字啦

黑山字詞有分leveal既

正野好正

作者: 小卡卡 時間: 2012-2-1 22:35

引用:

原帖由 援兵_★ 於 2012-2-1 22:24 發表
學英文呢家野冇得急嫁wo- -
努力啦

講得岩...........

作者: tony987852 時間: 2012-2-1 22:36

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原帖由 -YiN. 於 1-2-2012 10:34 PM 發表
最好要自己搵

1000蚊學到好多野

1000個最常用生字啦

黑山字詞有分leveal既

正野好正

問題係...人地聽日就要交...依家先學有咩用?

其實如果琴日開始就去Yahoo知識+,
或者你已經唔使咁煩...

作者: 再度回來 時間: 2012-2-1 22:37

聽日交就出事了

...

作者: 　ゞ.__κJa1. 時間: 2012-2-1 22:45 標題: 回復 58# 的帖子

yahoo知識 ...

作者: 借粟一燒._. 時間: 2012-2-1 22:50

Other learning experience?

作者: 紙包蒸餾水 時間: 2012-2-1 22:52

引用:

原帖由 借粟一燒._. 於 2012-2-1 22:50 發表
Other learning experience?

類似係呢d...........我就快癲拉譯到,仲要錯勁多

作者: No0B 時間: 2012-2-1 23:12

喇..姐係咁
小弟本身英文就極差
有錯請指正
旨在練習架姐

你好,我叫xxx.在六年的校園生活中,我在經濟科培養了濃厚的興趣,而我亦
Hello,I am xxx.I've studied in this school for six year and I've developed an strong interest in Economic due to the six-year school life.Also, I
非常熱愛創作,並將創作品展露於其他人眼前.所以我希望將來在市場推廣
keen on writing and always showing my works to others.Therefore, I want to take part in marketing
,市場策劃及廣告設計的範疇中參與其中,把自己的創意發揮
and ads-designing in the fulture in order to exert my creativity.

我認為過往在校園吸取的經驗有助我實踐抱負,除了日常跟同學交流外,
The experience I gained in school can help me practice my ambition. Apart form daily commutation with my schoolmates,
亦曾在學校舉行的義賣活動中擔任工作人員,嘗試設計推廣策略,並按客
I took part in charity sell in school by being a staff, and I tried to plan the promotion strategy.
人喜好選購貨品.向校外人士銷售,這類型活動為年輕的我充實市場經驗
I purchase goods with an eye to the want of my customer. The experience from these activitys equiped me
向實踐抱負踏進一小步.
and boost me to my ambition

譯到呢一度
因為我自己都有篇作文未搞掂..
等睇高手表演譯晒成篇
至於用唔用你自己決定啦

btw...google翻譯其實真係已經唔錯...
yahoo:

引用:

You are good, I call xxx. in six year campus life, I in passed through Jike to raise the strong interest, but I also deeply loved the creation, and will create the work to expose before other human eyes. Therefore I hoped that in the future in the market introduction, the market plan and in the advertisement design's category will participate in which, own creativity display I thought that passing is helpful me in the campus absorption's experience to practice the aspiration, besides exchanges daily with schoolmate, also once was the staff in the school hold's charity bazaar activity, the attempt design promotion strategy, and likes according to the visitor selecting and purchasing the goods. Sells to the extracurricular public figure, this type activity enriches the market experience for young me to step into a half step to the practice aspiration. Moreover I once in the school materials for internal reference and the environmental protection fashion design competition, was the men's clothing designer and the model, the attempt utilization different material waste, for example: Abandons the disc, 枱 the cloth, makes clothes to step the stage to sparkle lives the splendor, Ying takes the champion and best model's at the same time brings many confidence for mine design product ability, makes me to realize the dream bravely. I believed that university's professor can assist me to inquire into the knowledge and the fumble road ahead, let my academic society more solution difficult methods, moreover under the university strong study atmosphere and the degree-of-freedom are high, I can according to my ability in the study the display creativity, excavation more knowledge, moreover the specialized school organization, can give lets me study this is relieved I yearned for that hoped you can give me to the opportunity

[ 本帖最後由 No0B 於 2012-2-2 17:13 編輯 ]

作者: 阿平 時間: 2012-2-1 23:12

Hello,
my name is
XXX,
at
six years
of
school life,
I trained
in the
area of
economic
interest,
and I

Very
creative love,
and make the
products
to show off
in front
of other people.
So I
hope that in
the marketing

Marketing and advertising
design in
the category in which
their work

I think the
lessons of
the past
on campus
vision
to help me,
in addition to
the daily
interaction
with students,

Also
held
at the school
bazaar
staff
was
trying to
design
marketing strategies,
according to the customer

People want
to buy products.
Sales
outside the party,
this kind
of experience for the
young
market
enrich
my

Vision
to enter into
one
small step.

I am also
involved in
protecting the environment
in the school
of fashion
design, designers
and models
and men,
to try

Try
using different
types of
waste such as
discarded
CDs,
tablecloths,
clothes
on stage
made
of glittering,

Champion
and take the
victory, while
the best model
for my product
design to
bring
a lot of confidence
in the ability to

I'm more
ambitious
dreams.

I believe
a
professor
to help me
learn
knowledge
and explore
the road,
I decided
to learn
from

It is
difficult to
approach,
and the University
of strong
learning
atmosphere and
a
high degree
of freedom,
I
designed on the basis
of their ability

Creativity
in learning,
more
knowledge and professional
schools
to teach, give me
peace of mind
to know

This is what
I seek,
I
hope you
give
me the opportunity to

[ 本帖最後由阿平於 2012-2-1 23:25 編輯 ]

作者: kaka123 時間: 2012-2-1 23:24

學呢d.先學少量vocab,再大量grammer,寫一堆後先睇vocab(我本人睇法)

作者: C_k 時間: 2012-2-1 23:26

Jupas 0.0 我都要打了haha
google 翻譯錯到嘔哂奶

作者: kaka123 時間: 2012-2-1 23:29

引用:

原帖由 kaka123 於 2012-2-1 23:24 發表
學呢d.先學少量vocab,再大量grammer,寫一堆後先睇vocab(我本人睇法)

仲有想學英文唔好用google(查vocab另計)

作者: kaka123 時間: 2012-2-1 23:43

引用:

原帖由 紙包蒸餾水 於 2012-1-31 21:57 發表
甘願傾家蕩產,只求緊急換成英文

你好,我叫xxx.在六年的校園生活中,我在經濟科培養了濃厚的興趣,而我亦
非常熱愛創作,並將創作品展露於其他人眼前.所以我希望將來在市場推廣
,市場策劃及廣告設計的範疇中參與其中,把 ...

Greetings, I am xxx. I have grown strong interest in economic field during my six years school life. Also, I am creative and love to show it to others. Therefore, I would love to participate in marketing and advertising design in the future which can show my creativity.

I think my experience gained from my school life could help me achieve my objectives. Besides communicate with classmates, I am a helper in many charity functions held by my school, where I use my marking knowledge to help customer choosing the best products. Those experience are valuable have me to proceed forward.

On the other hand, I joined the green fashion show as a designer and model by using some different reusable waste, I won the competition and gain confidence in my designing skills, this will help me down the road.

I truly believe the professor can help my academic and give me views and advice of my future, my problem solving skills etc... And with the strong and free learning atmosphere, I could maximize my creativity and knowledge and get the most of the professional facilitates. I hope I could get the fair chance to the opportunities for me to achieve my goals.

求賜教

[ 本帖最後由 kaka123 於 2012-2-2 00:14 編輯 ]

作者: 紙包蒸餾水 時間: 2012-2-2 00:46

引用:

原帖由 kaka123 於 2012-2-1 23:43 發表
Greetings, I am xxx. I have grown strong interest in economic field during my six years school life. Also, I am creative and love to show it to others. Therefore, I would love to participate in marke ...

我吾睇番自己篇野,我發現我係吾識解=.=

作者: kaka123 時間: 2012-2-2 00:50

引用:

原帖由 紙包蒸餾水 於 2012-2-2 00:46 發表

我吾睇番自己篇野,我發現我係吾識解=.=

所以我有d擔心會穿煲,noob果篇好似仲難

作者: 花文. 時間: 2012-2-2 00:59

Hello, my name is xxx. in the six years of school life, I trained in the economic interest section, and I
very much love the creativity, and create works of showing off in front of other people So I hope that in marketing
, marketing and advertising design in the areas involved, the creativity of their own past, I think the lessons in the campus vision to help me, in addition to daily communication with students, but also in the school The charity event was held as a staff, try to design marketing strategies, according to passengers who like to buy goods. to outside sales people, this type of activity for the young market experience to enrich my vision to step into a small practice. In addition I have participation in environmental protection in the school fashion design competition, designers and models as men, try try to use different waste materials, such as: abandoned CDs, tablecloths, clothes on stage made of glittering, take the championship and win the best model while the design for my ability to bring a lot of confidence in the product, so I have more courage to realize their dreams. I believe that the university professor to help me explore knowledge and explore the road, I learned more from solution to our difficulties, and the University of strong learning atmosphere and the high degree of freedom, I am able to according to their ability in learning and creativity, to explore more knowledge, and professional educational institutions, give me peace of mind to learn this is my longing, hope you can give opportunities for me

作者: °★sKulL.Rj- 時間: 2012-2-2 01:04 標題: 回復 71# 的帖子

上translate綱 copy n paste??

作者: 花文. 時間: 2012-2-2 01:06

引用:

原帖由 °★sKulL.Rj- 於 2012-2-2 01:04 發表
上translate綱 copy n paste??

google

作者: kaka123 時間: 2012-2-2 01:07

引用:

原帖由 °★sKulL.Rj- 於 2012-2-2 01:04 發表
上translate綱 copy n paste??

人地有改野

作者: °★sKulL.Rj- 時間: 2012-2-2 01:08 標題: 回復 74# 的帖子

改左就唔會錯哂grammar

作者: kaka123 時間: 2012-2-2 01:38

引用:

原帖由 °★sKulL.Rj- 於 2012-2-2 01:08 發表
改左就唔會錯哂grammar

改=/=改岩

作者: 花文. 時間: 2012-2-2 01:39

引用:

原帖由 kaka123 於 2012-2-2 01:38 發表
改=/=改岩

google架.....

作者: kaka123 時間: 2012-2-2 01:46

引用:

原帖由 花文. 於 2012-2-2 01:39 發表

google架.....

我試過不過唔同,另外你地想累死人咩?V幣1$換人地前途

作者: kaka123 時間: 2012-2-2 01:55

水你決定用邊份未?

作者: 花文. 時間: 2012-2-2 02:04

引用:

原帖由 kaka123 於 2012-2-2 01:46 發表
我試過不過唔同,另外你地想累死人咩?V幣1$換人地前途

佢都考決定

比佢諗下姐...

可能你地有更好

zzz

作者: kaka123 時間: 2012-2-2 02:06

引用:

原帖由 花文. 於 2012-2-2 02:04 發表

佢都考決定

比佢諗下姐...

可能你地有更好

zzz

用GOOGLE仲衰過唔交

作者: 花文. 時間: 2012-2-2 02:08

引用:

原帖由 kaka123 於 2012-2-2 02:06 發表

用GOOGLE仲衰過唔交

下我次次都係google架喎,,,

老c肯收..

作者: kaka123 時間: 2012-2-2 02:08

引用:

原帖由 花文. 於 2012-2-2 02:08 發表

下我次次都係google架喎,,,

老c肯收..`

證明佢死心

作者: 花文. 時間: 2012-2-2 02:10

引用:

原帖由 kaka123 於 2012-2-2 02:08 發表
證明佢死心

唔知呢...

改左都好想叫佢不如唔好改啦

一個x

作者: kaka123 時間: 2012-2-2 02:16

引用:

原帖由 花文. 於 2012-2-2 02:10 發表

唔知呢...

改左都好想叫佢不如唔好改啦

一個x

咁你唔想讀無人逼到你

作者: 花文. 時間: 2012-2-2 02:17

引用:

原帖由 kaka123 於 2012-2-2 02:16 發表
咁你唔想讀無人逼到你

是那個老c玩弄我...

作者: 霧殺LK 時間: 2012-2-2 02:26

gogle

作者: FiNaL◎峰 時間: 2012-2-2 02:34

引用:

原帖由 kaka123 於 2012-2-1 23:43 發表
(你果篇咩野黎?入學信?) Greetings, I am xxx. I have grown strong interest in economic field during my six years school life. Also, I am creative and love to show it to others. Therefore, I would love to participate in marketing and advertising design in the future which can show my creativity.

I think my experience gained from my school life could help me achieve my objectives. Besides communicate with classmates, I am a helper in many charity functions held by my school, where I use my marking(SM) knowledge to help customer choosing the best products. Those experience(s) are valuable have me to proceed forward.

On the other hand(in addition好d, OTOH咁用好怪-_-), I joined the green fashion show as a designer and model by using some different reusable waste, I won the competition and gain confidence in my designing skills, this will help me down the road.

I truly believe the (邊個professor?...) professor can(could) help my academic and give me views and advice of my future, my problem solving skills, etc... And with the strong and free learning atmosphere, I could maximize my creativity and knowledge and(兩者唔關連) get the most of the professional facilitates. I hope I could get the fair chance to the opportunities(chance同opp係同一樣野黎..., 自己google search下個句子係唔係有問題) for me to achieve my goals.

岩岩改完佢話我唔夠15字, 返回上一頁=.='' 呃下字數字數字數字數字數字數字數

作者: kaka123 時間: 2012-2-2 03:16

引用:

原帖由 FiNaL◎峰 於 2012-2-2 02:34 發表

岩岩改完佢話我唔夠15字, 返回上一頁=.='' 呃下字數字數字數字數字數字數字數

打錯字果d我預左有,但我又唔想double check sosad....lz都潛左水

不過我認我__街,應該double check

[ 本帖最後由 kaka123 於 2012-2-2 03:19 編輯 ]

作者: FiNaL◎峰 時間: 2012-2-2 03:35

引用:

原帖由 No0B 於 2012-2-1 23:12 發表
喇..姐係咁
小弟本身英文就極差
有錯請指正
旨在練習架姐

你好,我叫xxx.在六年的校園生活中,我在經濟科培養了濃厚的興趣,而我亦
Hello,I am xxx.I've studied in this for six year and I developed an interest i ...

GOOGLE TRANSLATE 成篇野? 垃圾黎~ ...

作者: kaka123 時間: 2012-2-2 03:40

引用:

原帖由 FiNaL◎峰 於 2012-2-2 03:35 發表
GOOGLE TRANSLATE 成篇野? 垃圾黎~ ...

佢又唔似成份,因為你睇到呢個post幾個都係成份trans既回覆

作者: -　★Ckh 時間: 2012-2-2 05:11

笑死 ipve做工課

作者: 帥小雞XD 時間: 2012-2-2 06:10

祝你順風順水...加油`

作者: 呀東☆ 時間: 2012-2-2 07:10

峰話垃圾..

我諗你似難了

作者: To-波. 時間: 2012-2-2 07:16

拎d分黎我幫你搞掂

作者: .奶茶-_ 時間: 2012-2-2 10:54

長到我唔想see了

作者: 紙包蒸餾水 時間: 2012-2-2 14:47

好拉,岩岩番泥,琴晚訓左先無應
now又到作戰mode

作者: 花汶 時間: 2012-2-2 16:06

自小我便居住在城市裡,接受一套開放式教育制度,所以我能夠接觸很多新奇有趣的事物.還記得所有老師也讚賞我有一小聰明,就是學習每件事也非常快速,這大概是因為我學習東西時所追尋的是固中原因,而不是答案.
我年幼開始便幻想自己將來會成為一位出色企業家,所以我選擇了商業管理科目,因為我從所有事也總喜歡找捷徑,找策略去完成.這正好達到我企業家夢想的要求.所以逢是策略,我也喜愛探討一番.
中一至中三並沒有商業科目,但我和一班朋友喜愛在線上遊戲中炒賣東西.這並不是因為我貪玩,全因為能夠在遊戲中得到那種做一位模擬企業家的角色.
在遊戲中可以不用跟從指引地完成任務,這如我人生一樣,我也不喜歡盲目相信書上的知識,多時懷疑書中的答案.我會利用自己在多方面吸取的知識去分析事件,可說我是一位不信書的學習者!
第一年開始中四的商科,這達成了我一直想學習的目標.我對商業中所學習的東西非常有興趣.但是商業這一科比我想像中的困難好多,不是我自以為的–小聰明可以輕鬆解決,反而被小聰明誤導了我.
還記得中五時代表級社在十週年中做了一個攤位販賣物品,當中知道經營一種真實生意的每個情境,真的需要很多人力物力去協助和支持,而營銷手法亦非常講究,這次令我更有決心去成為一位企業家.
但中學時期的不足之處的是在當中實習機會並不多,我知道入讀大學後的商業學科會大有改變,我想有更多實習的機會,不再呆呆地聽取一大篇課文後不能演繹出來,所以我更希望能夠入讀商業管理系.
話雖如此,但就算不能進讀到大學的課程,我相信在任何地方只要有顆心,在任何地方也能學習想學習的,而我亦會繼續尋找途徑去繼續完成我企業家的夢想.

我既JUPAS係咁同你寫既方式好似大不同

我覺得你個篇可以改下太古版冇新意大學教授好難BUY

[ 本帖最後由花汶於 2012-2-2 16:09 編輯 ]

作者: No0B 時間: 2012-2-2 17:11

琴晚真係太趕
冇咩時間proof read一次

依家睇返真係錯漏百出...

btw,
等樓主update情況

[ 本帖最後由 No0B 於 2012-2-2 17:16 編輯 ]

作者: 紙包蒸餾水 時間: 2012-2-2 17:35

引用:

原帖由花汶於 2012-2-2 16:06 發表
自小我便居住在城市裡,接受一套開放式教育制度,所以我能夠接觸很多新奇有趣的事物.還記得所有老師也讚賞我有一小聰明,就是學習每件事也非常快速,這大概是因為我學習東西時所追尋的是固中原因,而不是答案.
我年幼開始 ...

我地要用英文300字去表達
基本上要具體,有例證,仲要講大學有咩特色幫到你實踐成就
仲要講想有咩成就,點解,加埋過往既經歷
仲要d例證係OEA有既
講野吾比人有實在感覺.....好煩

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