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作者: KinG.1    時間: 2011-11-18 15:14     標題: 英文作文 要講3分鐘 幫幫手睇下作成點 唔該晒!急!

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問題 1. Why do famous people often do charity work?    問題  2. What personal characteristic can make somebody famous? Why?
    問題  3. Would you like to be famous? Why or why not?
    Famous people often do charity in order to fundraise for those in need of the money , for example,the third world country,where and whom have poor sanitation and improvements should be made. They may strongly believe that every human should have the right to live equally ,or at least have a hygienic environment to live in.       A personal characteristic such as being confident would make somebody famous,people world wide respect people with confidence as they are able to open up and express their feelings. Or if they have a talent such as comedy,they will be able to confront an audience without having and holdbacks and perform to the best of their abilities.
      I wouldn't like to be famous as life would be much more difficult to deal with , especially in terms of privacy. Although being respected world wide , there will also be people who will dislike you. As a result of the media,someone famous would have watch their steps carefully , as doing something wrong ,no matter how small the works of a paparazzi can turn it into something which can end your career. This may then stain the impression of what others think of you , no matter how good or bad . And the chance of being able to live a normal person's live again would simply be impossible.
That all.
Thank you.

[ 本帖最後由 KinG.1 於 2011-11-19 19:56 編輯 ]
作者: KinG.1    時間: 2011-11-18 20:35

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作者: ME]diaoxie    時間: 2011-11-18 21:36

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some survey showing that many famous people often do charity work
why? lt is simple that 【你d答案】

let us look into the personal characteristic can make somebody famous.
the minjor personal characteristic can make somebody famous is [你d答案]


if u ask me,Would you like to be famous?
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im surely u will agree that my piont of view is true=]
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[ 本帖最後由 ME]diaoxie 於 2011-11-18 21:56 編輯 ]
作者: Dcfever.    時間: 2011-11-19 00:46

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作者: KinG.1    時間: 2011-11-19 19:57

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