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作者: Salvationarmy 時間: 2010-5-19 20:59 標題: 幫個忙

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•In 17thMay,2010. There was a serious traffic accident. 1person died and 6 people injured. A minibus and a taxi were driving on Tai Chung Kiu Road and someone passed through a red light. Therefore, they crushed together on a intersection and the minibus bumped into a railing , flew over a curb and dip in a subway. The driver of the minibus and taxi were arrested.

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•After I read this news, I think the passengers were so poor because the driver didn’t think about of their safety. The government should pay more attention on going through a red light. They should improve the punishment. 

•Going through a red light is very dangerous and selfish. We must stop when there is a red light.

[ 本帖最後由 Salvationarmy 於 2010-5-19 23:18 編輯 ]

作者: Salvationarmy 時間: 2010-5-19 21:36

冇人理.........................

作者: 人最緊要惡 時間: 2010-5-19 22:06

There were a minibus and a taxi were driving on Tai Chung Kiu Road and someone passed through a red light.
E句唔使最開頭個There were掛。

作者: Salvationarmy 時間: 2010-5-19 22:25 標題: 回復 3# 的帖子

已改 thx

作者: Salvationarmy 時間: 2010-5-19 23:19

仲有1篇唔該幫個忙...........

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