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•In 17thMay,2010. There was a serious traffic accident. 1person died and 6 people injured. A minibus and a taxi were driving on Tai Chung Kiu Road and someone passed through a red light. Therefore, they crushed together on a intersection and the minibus bumped into a railing , flew over a curb and dip in a subway. The driver of the minibus and taxi were arrested.

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•After I read this news, I think the passengers were so poor because the driver didn’t think about of their safety. The government should pay more attention on going through a red light. They should improve the punishment.
•Going through a red light is very dangerous and selfish. We must stop when there is a red light.

[ 本帖最後由 Salvationarmy 於 2010-5-19 23:18 編輯 ]

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There were a minibus and a taxi were driving on Tai Chung Kiu Road and someone passed through a red light.
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